you
pile things
on me
think my
corners
should be
smoothed
where is
my
space?
Postscript:
At 21:44, 6th June, I "murdered" my cat Seville
after a sudden illness
At 21:44, 6th June, I "murdered" my cat Seville
after a sudden illness
I love how the structure of your poem so resembles the order of Janelle's photograph, flashes of glossy windows high and low, the eye's zinging movement that is both linear and random. A good photographer friend, Jeff Lamb, and I had a years-long conversation about corners that lasted right up until his passing a few months ago. Expect to see this post of yours reflected in something of mine soon.
ReplyDelete...and I'm sorry about Seville.
ReplyDeletewow. Berlin vibrates through your recent entries. i was there 3 years ago, and this took me right back. love your creative take, here and in the neighbouring posts.
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